tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1641631738217155605.post3891712366627002942..comments2023-04-08T05:34:32.353-06:00Comments on Garbage: Chapter 17 - MicahDJ Savagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07144262117628748083noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1641631738217155605.post-17457248801129265662011-07-02T18:46:31.236-06:002011-07-02T18:46:31.236-06:00Yeah, there was something about that girl I didn&#...Yeah, there was something about that girl I didn't trust either. I wished you would have told us a little more about what the note said, though. It would have carried me through the problems Micah is sure to have in Phoenix. Having it hang in the air like that was kind of irksome. Some obvious spellings errors, like JC Penneys and a little formatting problem, but I'm loving where the story is going. Good job.Debra Erferthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08239033133090036826noreply@blogger.com